Big Sis (fiction)
Submitted on 12/01/07
This is my first attempt at a fictional story so this is all being made up,
no experiences to take it from. This story involves two sisters, the younger
one Mandy and the older sister Rachel.
Mandy sat there trying to make it look as though she was watching TV just
like her sister Rachel. But she was trying to conceal that she was really
trying to get peaks at Rachel's feet, Mandy was kind of disappointed since
they were in socks but just the sight of her feet got Mandy feeling hot.
Mandy couldn't remember a time that she didn' t like Rachels feet. She
could even remember being five and admiring her big sisters feet, she could
remember the first time she ever touched her sisters barefoot at age seven
and feeling the soft smoothness of them. She remembered the first time she
had smelled her sisters softball cleats to try to get the scent of her foot
at age ten and she could remember the first time she found herself unable to
take her eyes off her sisters feet and could only stare at them at 12.
Here Mandy was now 13 years old and Rachel was 16 and her feet got Mandy
still hot and turned on as ever. Mandy sat there as Rachel who had just come
back from a softball game sat there with her knee high pink socks drenched
with sweat giving them a redder look then usual. Mandy thought she could
almost smell the scent but she wasn't really sure, she wished she could just
stop time and bury her face deep into her sisters hot moist sole. Rachel sat
there watching TV seeming to not notice her sisters vain attempts to eye up
Rachels feet from the corners of her eyes. Finally Rachel took off her socks
first gripping the top of the sock near her knee and slowly peeling it off
her still sweaty skin. Mandy sat there and looked over about to burst as she
saw her sister slowly peel away the sock revealing her mouth watering foot.
Mandy couldn't help but stare as Rachel's sockless foot and then watched as
there became two sockless feet sitting a mere three feet from her on the
couch. She took a quick look of Rachels foot finding that were still the
same sexy to die for feet that she remembered and even looked better with
the sweat glistening on her newly polished toes. Rachels feet were the most
perfect things Mandy had ever seen they were about a perfect size seven,
with a high arch, perfectly shaped heels and toes which were painted a sky
blue at the moment, Mandys favorite, and smooth skin with a very deep tan.
Mandy sat there trying to eye Rachels feet out of the corner of her eyes
and was felt like she was slowly dying since Rachel unknowingly teased her
by wiggling her toes allowing cool fresh air to pass between them. After
about a half hour of seeing this Rachel said she was going to go shower off
and stood up and walked away. Mandy watched as her sister walked away,
looking and hearing how her sisters soft feet made a soft padding noise as
she walked up the wooden steps. Mandy continued to watch Rachels feet go up
those stairs until they were out of sight and even then she continued to
listen to the light thump of her feet until she could no longer hear it.
Mandy sat there letting out a sigh and thinking to herself "that was close I
almost lost it, I just wish that I could get at her feet without her knowing
or thinking differently of me...argh this is driving me crazy!" As Mandy
slouched back down relaxing that her temptation was now upstairs no longer
in her sight, no longer in her mind she noticed that Rachel as forgotten to
pick up socks. Mandy sat there for a minute staring the still clearly moist
socks that held her sisters foot sweat and odor within them. Mandy couldn't
help but get a huge grin on her face as her hand slowly reached shakingly
towards her sisters socks. She gripped the socks and slowly looking around
once, twice, three times and since there didn't seem to be anyone around
buried her now shaking face into her sisters socks. The smell was strong and
she almost felt like she would explode from the lovely scent that emitted
from the dirty sweat stained socks, she took another deep sniff and let out
a small whimper of delight. Mandy was just about to take in a deep breath of
her sisters foot odor when suddenly she heard her sister call out she
quickly turned to the steps where she saw her sisters head sticking out from
the side with a weird look on her face. Rachel said "umm...Mandy have you
seen my hair brush and were you just smelling my socks?" Mandy was
shocked and stuttered "umm...a yea...yeah I mean not smelling your socks I
mean to umm.. where your hair brush is it's a ...in my room I needed to
borrow it...and I wasn't smelling them for the delight of it I smelled
something bad and wanted to see if that was them." Mandy said that last part
with as much convincing of a voice she could and then quickly added "you
shouldn't leave your smelly softball socks laying around they'll stink up
the whole house, I was just about to go put them in the laundry room." "Oh
ok thanks," was the only response that Rachel gave as she ran back up stairs
and left Mandy there feeling as though she had just ran a marathon with as
fast as her heart beat and how much she could feel herself starting to
sweat. Again with another sigh Mandy sinking further down thinking to
herself "now that was close, oh my God what if she doesn't believe me,
she'll think I'm some kind of freak." Mandy continued to sit there not
moving, she waited until she was sure she heard the shower running and then
she lifted up Rachels socks again and began to inhale deeply. In all honesty
she wasn't going to put them in the laundry, she had an older pair of
Rachels socks which had lost their smell so she decided she would switch the
two pairs. She got up and did just that taking out a pair of socks she must
have stolen out of the laundry at least one maybe even two years ago. She
put in the new socks where she kept them stashed and went back to read a
book.
Later that day Rachel came down the stairs and sat across from Mandy
turning on the TV and laying on the couch in such a way that her barefeet
were only a few inches from Mandy's thighs. Mandy tried to continue reading
her book but couldn't help eyeing her sister feet when Rachel started
wiggling her toes which genteelly made her toes tap against Mandy's thigh.
She kept taking glances down feel the soft skin of her sisters feet rubbing
against her and seeing those blue toe nail go up and down. Soon Mandy let go
of any hope of continuing to read and only held the book infront of her as a
hope of warding off any suspicion from Rachel. After about an hour of eyeing
her sisters feet out of the corner of her eye Rachel looked at her and
simply said "Hey...I know this is a weird question but could you...rub my
feet?" Mandy didn't know what to say she knew that she wanted to scream yes
and dive into those beautiful toes and arches but she didn't want to seem to
eager to she sat there and shot a weird look at Rachel. Her sister then put
on a pouty look and said "please!! My feet hurt so much from softball and I
promise I'll never ask you again!" Mandy sighed and rolled her eyes still
trying to hide that she was aching to let her hands rub all over her sisters
size sevens up and down the smooth tan skin. Rachel took this as a yes and
practically threw her feet into Mandy's lap as she laid completely on the
couch. Mandy slowly placed her hands onto her sisters right foot and
squeezed lightly as she lifted it off her lap a few inches. Mandy had to
take deep breathes to control herself from gasping aloud at how soft Rachels
feet were, they were soft and tender almost like the skin of a newborn.
Slowly Mandy began to move her thumbs in circular motions around the center
of Rachels soft milk white soles, going around and around feeling the warm
folds of skin as she genteelly rubbed. Rachel's head fell back against a
couch pillow as she closed her eyes and le! t out a slight sigh of
contentment, which Mandy smiled at knowing she was doing at least a somewhat
good job. Mandy continued to knead through the soft skin of her sisters
feet, running her fingers along her soles and her dry skinned heels, then
feeling on the tips of her fingers the smooth skin of the top of her Rachels
feet along with the detail of the bones of her skinny tanned feet. She
pulled on and rubbed between each of her long toes feeling the soft cushion
of each of her toes with her fingers and even giving a little pinch to see
just how soft they were. It wasn't until about a half hour after she had
begun rubbing her sisters feet that she noticed Rachel had stopped answering
her questions or talking to her at all. She looked up to see that Rachel now
laid there with her eyes closed and her chest going up and down at an even
pace, Mandy couldn't believe her luck to have found her sister asleep and
her feet in her hands!
She looked again to see if and to make sure that Rachel was asleep and
then she could not help but lift the foot just a little closer to her face
which she then took a slight sniff. The smell was a nice smell, it smelled
like similar to that of the bath soap that was in the bathroom she and her
sister shared. Mandy couldn't help but be a little disappointed that it
wasn't the nature pungent odor of her sisters feet but just the fact that
she was able to sit there and hold her sisters feet in her hands sniff away
gave her so much pleasure. She decided at first that smelling would be all
she did, she didn't want to take it too far, she just wanted to get a little
bit of Rachel's foot odor and then she would be good. That idea did not last
long as she soon found herself softly kissing Rachel's feet from the tops of
her toes to the bottom of her heels. She could not even remember when she
started kissing her feet, it was just a natural thing that happened while
she smelled. But she didn't feel weird about it at all, she felt like it was
a very good thing, a natural thing for her to do and a natural place for her
to be at. During one of her kisses she suddenly realized that she allowed
her tongue to sneak about between her lips running quickly across her
sisters big toe where she had been putting a gentle kiss on. She stopped,
she had smelled and kissed her sisters feet but here her body took over and
she had actually licked her sisters feet, she had allowed her tongue to go
across the soles of her sisters feet. Her feet which she had sweat
constantly soak into and walked around on her feet. But her she was allowing
her tongue to taste the joy that was her sisters silky smooth skin even on
her soles which for most people would be disgusting. Mandy didn't know if
she wanted to keep going for fear that her sister might wake up but she
couldn't resist the urge to keep on smelling, kissing, licking, and just
generally adoring the amazing feet that Rachel had. She looked again ! to
see i f Rachel was asleep and once have seen this she took the biggest
chance she ever had in her life, she took her tongue and ran it along the
entire course of her sisters foot. It took the same taste as the smell of
her feet except it seemed a little salty in an odd way.
Suddenly Mandy heard something, it wasn't allowed noise, it was actually
rather faint but she looked up to see Rachel with a smile on her face. Mandy
stopped dead, her heart started to beat rapidly as she began to think "Oh
god she's awake and knows!" Mandy couldn't have been more correctly ask
Rachel suddenly spoke "what no more adoration you freak?" With that word
"freak" Mandy almost felt like her entire world shattered around her and she
began to put Rachel's foot down so she could go find a place to hide. But
just as soon as she put Rachel's foot down Rachel put it back up and planted
in on her face saying "oh I'm only kidding, I was enjoyed the attention to
my feet you will continue won't you?" Mandy was dumb founded and tried to
speak but all that got out was a "uh" before Rachel seeing her chance shoved
about half of her size seven foot into her sisters mouth. Rachel then said
"now suck" Mandy happily complied and began to suck vigorously upon the
golden arches of her sisters feet. " Ahhh that feels so good" said Rachel
with a smile as she flexed her toes inside Mandy's mouth wiggling them
against her quickly moving and slurping tongue. Mandy looked up at Rachel
with a question in her eyes which she promptly answered "I know, I've always
had suspicions and then when I saw you smelling my socks earlier that's when
it fully confirmed so I figured why not give you a taste of what you so
clearly crave so much for." Mandy began to smile but then quickly looked
back up but before she could even give an idea of what her thoughts were
Rachel said "don't worry we'll keep this our little secret." Mandy this time
smiled while her mouth was full of her sisters toes which she had spread
widely in her mouth allowed Mandy to lick between every small pocket of her
sisters foot.
Mandy continued to worship Rachel's feet until her sister finally pulled
her feet away saying "I think that's enough for now, maybe we can do this
again." With that she turned back to the TV and continued watching as though
the whole thing had never happen at all.
Well, I hope you enjoyed the story, my first attempt at writing fiction. It
didn't turn out the way I had planned, it's harder to make up things then it
is to just tell from experience!
From Your Fellow Foot Fetisher Susan
You can reach me at Susans005@aim.com
I hope to hear comments!